SQUIRRELS
The squirrel is one of my favourite
animals. They usually live in temperate forests, on the trees, but you can also
see them in many parks in Europe and North America.
The squirrel is a small mammal. They have got four
short legs, brown fur, small eyes and ears and a long furry tail.
Squirrels are fast, very active, quite
common and very intelligent. A squirrel can climb very tall trees. They can
recognise their home among thousands of trees. They can jump very well. They
collect nuts and hide them in lots of different places. They can recognise
these places in winter to have food. They can also fool other squirrels to protect
their nuts.
They can stand on two legs and
use their hands to open and eat nuts.
I like squirrels
because they are small, nice and very sociable. They get near people in parks
and they are not usually afraid of humans. Some people have them as pets, but I
think this is horrible.
THE EAGLE
ReplyDeleteMy favourite animal is the eagle. They are birds. There are a lot of diferents species, they live in America, Asia and Europe. They have two long legs, two beautiful and big wings and a brown feathers.
The eagles have a very nice sight, they see the most little animals when they fly. And they are very intelligents for hunt.
I like eagles beacause they are wild, free and very beautiful.
Selene 2ºA
THE EAGLE
DeleteMy favourite animal is the eagle. They are birds. There are a lot of different species, they live in America, Asia and Europe. They have two strong legs, two beautiful big wings and brown feathers.
Eagles have a very good sight, they see the smallest animals when they fly. And they are very intelligent for hunt.
I like eagles because they are wild, free and very beautiful.
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THE CHEETAH
ReplyDeleteThe cheetah is my favourite animal. He's a mammal that belongs to the feline species. His natural habitat is normally the jungle and rainforest of Asia, South Africa and South America. Here he can hunt his preys easilly and at the same time he can hide from his enemies.
The most typical features of this animal is his fur which is really beautiful. His orange with black spots. He has also got very sharp ears that permits him to sense any noise. He's the fastest animal in the world. He can run at a speed of 60km/h.
I like this animal because I love his fur and it's very wild and amazing. He's very intelligent and a great hunter.
Andrea Millán 2ºA
DOLPHINS
DeleteThe dolphin is one of my favourite animals . They live in oceans and seas , they ´re all over the world . Dolphins are mammals but they live in the water . They haven´t got any arms or legs but they can swim very fast with their tails.
They´re very fast, sometimes they jump above the water . They can have from 20 to 50 teeth
I like dolphins because they´re really sociable and friendly I think they´re always smiling .
Ismael Jareño 2ºA
VERY GOOD
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DeleteTHE GIRAFFE
ReplyDeleteMy favourite animal is the giraffe. It's a mammal who lives in the savannah of Africa. It's between 5 and 6 metres high and it has an average weight of 1,600 kg for males and 830 kg for females. It has a big neck for eat the leaves of the tallest trees and a big tongue. It has four legs and a tail. His fur is yellow with dark spots.
It can defend him with a powerful kick. The heart of the giraffes generate the double of bloods that the others mammals. They communicate among them by ultrasounds. They can run at 60 km/per hour.
I like them because from I was child I liked them and they were my favourite animals.
THE GIRAFFE
DeleteMy favourite animal is the giraffe. It's a mammal who lives in the savannah of Africa. It's between 5 and 6 metres high and it has an average weight of 1,600 kg for males and 830 kg for females. It has a big neck for EATING the leaves of the tallest trees and a big tongue. It has four legs and a tail. ITS fur is yellow with dark spots.
It can defend ITSELF with a powerful kick. The heart of giraffes generate the double blood thaN the others mammals. They communicate among them by ultrasounds. They can run at 60 km/per hour.
I like them because SINCE I was child I liked them and they were my favourite animals.
WELL DONE
THE BUNNY
ReplyDeleteMy favourite animal is the bunny last 9 years. It's a very little mammal who lives in so many places in the world. It's 70 cm long, and 20 cm high. It's wheight is between 3 to 6 kilos. It has two very long ears, and it's very quickly and elusive.
It is threatened by several predators, like foxes, wolfs and many dogs, but sometimes he escapes whits his velocity.
I like bunnys because when I was a kid, my father gave me a bunny, I called him Pancha. She died 2 months ago, with 12 years.
I forgot my name: Carlos Aribau
DeleteTHE ELEPHANT.
DeleteMy favourite animal is the elephant.
There are two types the elephants.
It live of africa and asia. It live between 60 and 70 years.
It´s weight 11.000 kilos and 3,96 m tall.
It´s the bigest animal of earth.
It can connect with others elephant with his ears.
It has a very big trunk, for eat and wash.
It eat: leaf, grass and wood.
ANDREA MORENO 2ºA.
THE ELEPHANT.
DeleteMy favourite animal is the elephant. There are two types OF elephants.
THEY live IN Africa and Asia. THEY live between 60 and 70 years.
It´s weight IS 11.000 kilos and THEY ARE 3,96 m tall. (EXACTLY????) It´s the bigGest animal of earth.
It can connect with other elephant with his ears.
It has a very big trunk, TO eat and wash.
It eatS leaVES, grass and wood.
OK, but there are some mistakes. organize the content in paragraphs and try to connect sentences.
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DeleteTHE BUNNY
DeleteMy favourite animal is the bunny. It's a very little mammal who lives in so many places in the world. It's 70 cm long, and 20 cm high. It's weight is between 3 to 6 kilos. It has two very long ears, and it's very FAST and elusive.
It is threatened by several predators, like foxes, WOLVES and many dogs, but sometimes he escapes thanks to his velocity.
I like BUNNIES because when I was a kid, my father gave me a bunny, I called him Pancha. She died 2 months ago, with 12 years.
GOOD!
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ReplyDeleteHAMSTER
ReplyDeleteMy favourite animal is the hamster. It lives Europe deserts and it is a rodent. It can be brown, grey and white.
It is a small animal with long teeth. It sleeps during the day. It lives 3 or 4 years. It eats seeds and drinks water. It has good smell and hearing.
I like it because it is funny, enjoyable and it is easy to care. You can play with it at home.
I had got a hamster two years ago. Its name was Señor Perez
Diego Catalán Val.
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HAMSTER
DeleteMy favourite animal is the hamster. It lives IN EuropeAN deserts and it is a rodent. It can be brown, grey and white.
It is a small animal with long teeth. It sleeps during the day. It lives 3 or 4 years. It eats seeds and drinks water. It has good smell and hearing.
I like it because it is funny, enjoyable and it is easy to care. You can play with it at home.
I had got a hamster two years ago. Its name was Señor Perez
A BIT SIMPLE BUT CORRECT. IT'S OK.
PIG
ReplyDeleteThe pig isn't my favourite animal but I want to write about it.
The pig is one of the cleanest animal on Earth, but many persons think that pigs are dirty.
Characteristics: Their body is long and flexible, they have 4 shorts legs and a long tail.
They have a lot of meat and food. Their meat is called pork, but thet have more food like ham, chorizo, sausages or bacon. It's taste.
Nicolás Escudero 2ºA
PIG
DeleteThe pig isn't my favourite animal but I want to write about it.
The pig is one of the cleanest animal on Earth, but many PEOPLE think that pigs are dirty.
Their body is long and flexible, they have 4 shorts legs and a long tail.
They have a lot of meat and food. Their meat is called pork, but theY PRODUCE more food like ham, chorizo, sausages or bacon. It's tastY.
OK, BUT CONTENT IS A BIT POOR...
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ReplyDeleteHORSE
ReplyDeleteThe horse is very common. Usually it's domesticated and it lives in farms, but it's also wild. It can be of different colors.
Characteristics: It has 4 legs and a big head. It also has a long tail. Humans use the horse to ride or travel with it.
I like it because you can ride with it and it's nice and funny.
Javier Garcés Blasco 2ºA
HORSE
DeleteThe horse is very common. IT IS USUALLY domesticated and it lives in farms, but it's also wild. It can be of different colors.
It has 4 legs and a big head. It HAS ALSO GOT a long tail. Humans use the horse to ride or travel with it.
I like it because you can ride with it and it's nice and funny.
OK, but the composition is a bit short and the content quite simple. Horses can do many things, but you don't explain.
TIGER
ReplyDeleteMy favorite animal is the tiger, it is a mammal. The tiger is the biggest feline. It lives in the prairies and in the forests of Asia. In the forests of Asia its fur allows it camouflage. The tiger has got an orange fur with black stripes and its belly is white. Some tigers have got more than 100 stripes. It has got a long tail, two small ears, four short legs, two yellow eyes… It has got long mustaches and they are two meters long. The tigers are quite wild, fast, aggressive…
They are excellent swimmers, they are the best hunters and they have got an excellent view.
I like this animal because they are big, its fur is very beautiful and amazing and they are very intelligent.
Marta Amezcua 2ºA
TIGER
DeleteMy favorite animal is the tiger, it is a mammal. The tiger is the biggest feline. It lives in the prairies and in the forests of Asia. In the forests of Asia its fur allows it camouflage. The tiger has got orange fur with black stripes and its belly is white. Some tigers have got more than 100 stripes. It has got a long tail, two small ears, four short legs, two yellow eyes… It has got long mOustaches and they are two meters long. The tigers are quite wild, fast, aggressive…
They are excellent swimmers, they are the best hunters and they have got an excellent view.
I like this animal because they are big, its fur is very beautiful and amazing and they are very intelligent.
VERY GOOD!
POLAR BEAR.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite animal is the polar bear, it is a carnivorous mammal. Lives in the polar medium. Is one of the biggest carnivore of the earth. Usually be whites and very big, and he has four legs. They eat many animals, but his favourite are the baby seals.
Normally eat 30 kilos of food on the day, and the baby bears 1k.
They are good swimmers. Also are peaceful and very intelligent.
I like this animal because i think it's very nice, and it's interesting. I really like the baby bears polar because are lovely and adorable.
LEYRE NÚÑEZ 2ºA
POLAR BEAR.
DeleteMy favourite animal is the polar bear, it is a carnivorous mammal. IT lives in polar HABITATS. IT is one of the biggest carnivores on earth.THEY ARE USUALLY white and very big, and THEY HAVE four legs. They eat A LOT OF animals, but ITS favourite are the baby seals.
THEY normally eat 30 kilos of food EVERY day, and the baby bears 1k.
They are good swimmers. THEY are ALSO peaceful and very intelligent.
I like this animal because I think it's very nice, and it's interesting. I really like the baby bears polar because THEY are lovely and adorable.
OK, but don't forget in English all verbs need a subject!!
MIGUEL ROYO 2º
ReplyDeletedolphin
My favourite animal is the Dolphin , it´s a mammal andi t lives in the ocean , it is about 2.3 metres long and it´s Black and White. It can Leigh 100 kilograms. It has a long nose andi t has four fins.
It can reach 50 km/h swimming. They don´t have enemis but pollution and human beimgs affect them.
I like it because it is a mamman but can breathe outside the water also it´s a very sociable animal and scientists say dolphins have a language and they communicates with sound waves .
THE DOLPHIN
DeleteMy favourite animal is the dolphin , it´s a mammal and it lives in the ocean , it is about 2.3 metres long and it´s black and white. It can weigh 100 kilograms. It has a long nose andi t has four fins.
It can reach 50 km/h swimming. They don´t have enemies but pollution and human beings affect them.
I like it because it is a mammal but can breathe outside the water also it´s a very sociable animal and scientists say dolphins have a language and they communicates with sound waves .
GOOD. I love dolphins too!
Some spelling mistakes
LION
ReplyDeletemy favourite animal is the lion. It's a mamal and lives in India and África. Males weigh between 145 and 251 kg , They measure between 160 and 210 cm and it has a male. Females weigh between 110-118 kg , they measure between 140 and 175 cm and they haven't male. The wild males live 12 years and the wild females live 16 years.
The Lions go around the prey for hunt and they eat the remains of other animals.Some lions hund and others look after.
I like this animal because it is big,wild social and very beautiful.
Paula Idiago 2ºA
LION
DeleteMy favourite animal is the lion. It's a mamal and lives in India and África. Males weigh between 145 and 251 kg , They measure between 160 and 210 cm and it has a MANE. Females weigh between 110-118 kg , they measure between 140 and 175 cm and they haven't GOT A MANE. The wild males live 12 years and the wild females live 16 years.
Lions go around the prey for hunt and they eat the remains of other animals.Some lions HUNT and others look after.
I like this animal because it is big,wild, social and very beautiful.
WELL DONE
FLAMINGO
ReplyDeleteMy favourite animal is the flamingo. It´s a bird. He lives in a larges land wiht water. They live in every continets.They eat algaes.
They have pinks feathers, a big peak and four fingers. They mesure between 80cm y 1`40m.
I like flamingos because they are very elegant and beautiful.
CLARA LAORDEN 2ºA
FLAMINGO
ReplyDeleteMy favourite animal is the flamingo. It´s a bird. He lives in a large land WITH water. They live in every contineNts.They eat algaes.
They have pink feathers, a big peak and four fingers. They mesure between 80cm y 1`40m.
I like flamingos because they are very elegant and beautiful.
OK, but the content is quite simple, you don't explain much about flamingos.